I've been getting so many request for 'back issues' of my fics. I decided to
do some repost. Here is a slightly cleaned up version of Separation anxiety.
Permanent will follow and then the completed 'Spirit within' over the next
week or so. I don't mind getting C&C on these, in fact I'd love it. Send C&C
to Catbert25@aol.com
Enjoy!
Disclaimer. Ranma 1/2 is owned by Takahashi and some japanese company. It is
ublished in the U.S. by Vis communications and They could easily crush me and
my puny bank account. [That is if I didn't imediately run out of the country
after getting the first call from their lawyers.]
Separation Anxiety part 7
Ryoga stood in the center of the clearing and breathed in measured breaths
he waited and reached out with his mind as he cleared it of all things. "Now."
he said as he lept straight up over the two logs that came together beneath
him he landed on top of them as they swung uneasily from the ropes they hung
on. He lept down as two more colided where he had been again. One fell from
above and he slid to the side casually avoiding it. He lept into the air again
to avoid two more of the logs as they swung toward him, "Damn to late." he
thought as he realised he could not move fast enough to avoid them. They
slammed into him and he grunted as he stopped them in the air with his fist.
He hung in the air like a gymnast on the rings. He then pulled himself into a
hand stand and fliped away from them as they finally colided together. "Still
not good enough." he said bitterly as he looked at the trinket the woman had
given him. "I don't need you." he said to it.
"Then why don't you get rid of it?" said a small voice in his head. Ryoga
growled bitterly and clentched the medalion in his fist.
Ukyo stood looking silently at Ranma with a grim horror spreading across her
face. "Wh-what?" she said with tears in her eyes.
Shampoo stood stairing silently at nothing no reaction had come yet. "Good
bye Ukyo, Shampoo." said Ranma as he turned away.
Ranchan looked on silently a short distance away.
"Shampoo kill." said Shampoo standing in an icy voice.
"If any thing happens to Akane I will not forgive either of you." said Ranma
warningly for the first time since he had called them together his voice was
unwavering.
Shampoo's icy stare fell and gave way to tears.
"You said she was uncute! She can't even cook for gods sake." cried Ukyo
desparately.
"I'm sorry." said Ranma saddly as he walked away.
"You think this is over?! I'll never give you up! I'll get you back yet
Ranma!" cried Ukyo.
"That right!" agreed Shampoo.
Ranma stopped "Please don't, You never had me. I can't do this again." said
Ranma with his back still turned to them. He walked away slowly.
Ran-chan walked up to Ranma and was brushed off. "Get away from me." he said
to her.
"Ranma you did the right thin-" she started to say but was cut off. "Shut
up! are you happy now?! I just crushed them!!" yelled Ranma at her.
"No." replied Ranchan with a comforting smile. "I'm not happy at all." she
said as she walked away with her own tears.
Soun Tendo greeted the new comer at the door of the dojo pleasantly. "You
should have told us you were coming we could have better prepaired for you."
said Soun.
"I hope its not a problem." said a feminine voice.
"Not at all, come in." said Soun.
Ranma walked on towards the dojo he had been out for almost two hours after
his revalation to the girls. "Ranma Saotome what have you done to my
Shampoo??!!" cried a familar voice as the air rushed with the sounds of
weapons. Ranma turned to face Mousse as he ran towards him with knives
sticking from his sleeves. "Prepair to die!" cried Mousse.
"What the hell did I do now?" said Ranma. "I figgured you would be happy you
flaky jerk." said Ranma as he kicked Mousse in the face.
"Why would I be happy when Shampoo came home in tears?" growled Mousseas he
swung at Ranma. Ranma dodged and weaved around him.
"Would you rather I didn't do it?" groweled Ranma.
"Of course I would!" yelled Mousse as he threw several more weapons at Ranma.
"How dare you strip her of her honor that way!" he said as Ranmma kicked him
in the head again.
"You think I wanted to?" yelled Ranma punching at him. "You think I enjoyed
doing that to Shampoo and Ukyo?" he growled as he swept Mousse off his feet.
"Konji Too??!! ENEMY TO ALL WOMEN" cried Mousse as he rushed Ranma with a new
batch of knives.
"What? cried Ranma. "Mousse did you even ask her why she was crying?"
grumbled Ranma as he landed behind Mousse after fliping over him to avoid the
knives.
"Why? your crime was so obvious the instant she walked in. Fear not my
beautiful Shampoo I will avenge your purity!" cried Mousse as he charged at
Ranma yet again.
Ranma kicked him in the head a final time. "Mousse she was crying because I
broke up with her."
"What?" said Mousse stopping in mid slash. You heard me." said Ranma.
"Well I'll still give you a good beating." said Mousse as he swung half
heartedly at Ranma.
Ran-chan walked into the Tendo home after a long walk. "Well look who's
here." said Nabiki.
"Huh?" said Ran-chan looking up from her thoughts. She almost backed into a
wall when she did. "H-H-Hello." she said nervously looking at the new arival.
Ryoga Hibiki lookad at his suroundings as he emmerged from the clearing he
had been training in and sighed "Now where am I?" he wondered. He walked on
and tripped over a bench. "I thougt I was in the wilderness." he said as he
looked around to find he was in a park. "But a park where?" he wondered aloud.
As if in answer Ranma walked by not three feet in front of him.
"Stupid Mousse, man what a lousy day." he muttered not even noticing Ryoga
sprawled on the ground from his fall.
"Ranma prepair to die!" called Ryoga from behind him. Ranma sighed. "Of
course." he muttered.
"Not today Ryoga I've had a bad day." he said as he turned to face The lost
boy.
"Then I'll put you in the mood! "Bakusai Tenketsu!" cried Ryoga.
Yet another great stopping point.
Who is it? cmon guess! [I actually think its pretty obvious but hey thats
just me] And what is with this thing Ryoga has what is it and what does it do?
Also the great match making sceme. [its not what you think trust me.] C&C
welcome and appreciated.
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