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OK so I’m sorry, I know it took me a little to update but I do have the story in my head but it’s hard to write it.
I do not own Ranma ½ or any of the characters in it.
Sixth chapter
“So you two are coming in or what”
“Sorry Nabs we are coming”
“How many times do I have to tell you to stop calling me nabs”
“Sorry but it fits you perfectly”
“Fits me perfectly come on Ranma don’t joke with me”
“Akane don’t you think its perfect for her”
“Yes its definitely her”
“Oh sure two against one really Akane, I’m your sister you should be on my side but what I could expect, it was silly for me to think you will go against your boyfriend.
Don’t You two look cute blushing like that, let me just, ok this will be a great picture”
Nabiki left to the living room leaving two extremely embarrassed ten year old kids.
“I think we should go” Said a still red akane
“Yeah it sounds like a good idea”
They enter to the family room to find a big chocolate cake with ten fyering candles.
“Oh my little baby is growing; she is going to leave me soon”
“Congratulations Akane”
“Thank you Kasumi”
“Here is my present”
“Oh a cook” Akane said while she was hugging Kasumi
“I remember you said you wanted to improve your cooking”
“May be I should prepare something now”
“Why don’t we eat the cake first?”
“Yeah Akane, later maybe we can spar a little, I’m a little rusty I hadn’t fight for a month”
“Ok”
“Oh my little girl is leaving me”
In the dojo
“It looks like you improve a lot ´Kane”
“Well is easier now that daddy is treating more like a martial artist and less like a”
“Girl?”
“RANMA”
“Ouch geese Akane you didn’t have to hit me that hard, ´Kane are you ok?”
“I think I hurt my leg when I kicked you”
“Are you sure?”
“Why don’t you try to stand?”
“But what if I fall”
“You know I’m here and I wouldn’t let anything happen to you”
“Ok let’s see”
“Ouch” then there was little sound it sounded like a click, both kids turn to see where that sound had come from and then it was another little sound but this time it came with a bright light.
“Oh I’m glad the flash is working out fine” was said while a little eleven year old girl go away of the dojo. That was the moment they understand what Nabiki was doing.
As promise Ranma didn’t let anything happen to Akane, when he saw her falling he put the only thing he had that will stop the floor to hurt Akane. He put his body and in that exact moment was when Nabiki enter the dojo.
In that moment they would be in different corners of the room if wasn’t for Akane injury, Ranma was very careful not to hurt Akane while he stand up then he took Akane by surprise when he carried her, Ok we are going to the doctor...
Seventh Chapter
“Ok we are going to the doctor”
“But I’m ok really”
“Come on ´Kane you can’t even stand by yourself”
“Of course I can”
“Ok let’s see it”
After they stand up and fall again Ranma decide the best choice was to go with the local doctor
“Come on Akane, I don’t know why you refuse to go” It wasn’t like she had much of a choice Ranma was taking her roof hoping across Nerima in the direction of the doctor office. While she swears that if he gave her another chance this time they wouldn’t fall.
“Come on Ranma, listen to me I do not need to go to the doctor”
“Why are you complaining so much about it?”
“I don’t need you to treat me like I would break by anything”
“You are hurt, so I’m taking you to the doctor”
“Why don’t you let it heal by it self?”
“Why should I do it, if I can take you to the doctor?”
“Because you owe me”
“And what do you think I owe you?” At this comment Ranma stop over a roof of what seems like a school.
“When we were six you hurt yourself when we were at the dojo remember?”
“Oh yeah I hurt my arm, your father told me I shouldn’t be pushing me so hard”
“Yes and even if I want you to get better I convince the to let you keep practicing”
“And I master the technique”
“Ok so let’s return home”
“But”
“No buts you owe me, plus it’s your fault I had to kick”
“My fault, I only said girl”
“So you admit you think we are weaker, I can’t believe it”
“I never said that Akane, You know I respect women and I think of them as great warriors”
“Then why do you insist to take me to the doctor, when you are hurt you don’t go”
“That’s totally different”
“Oh yeah and why it is different”
“Because I can take the pain”
“So you are saying I can’t”
“No I know you can but”
“What?”
“I care to much for you I can’t stand to see you hurt” Said a blushing Ranma
“So you think I’m a good martial artist” Said an equal red Akane
“Yes but you are my best friend and I wish for you the best, even if you get mad at me, even if is not the best for me”
“Thank you Ranma”
“So that means I can take you to the doctor”
“I wish you didn’t”
“May I ask why don’t you want to go, come on doctors aren’t that bad, some even know a lot of martial arts I’ve been thought by several doctors”
“Yeah but” Said a blushing Akane
“What oh no you are red do you have temperature” Said Ranma while he touch Akane´s forehead with the back of his hand.
“Well everything seems right”
“I’m ok Ranma it’s just”
“What?”
“I hadn’t tell this to anyone”
“Well who best to start rather than me”
“Ok so I like our doctor”
“Great so we can go with him”
“No you don’t understand I really like him”
“Well I already tell you its good you like it may be we now can go so he can check your leg”
“I don’t think you are listening Ranma”
“I did listen; you said you like the doctor”
“Aha”
“Then you said you really like the doctor”
“Yes”
“Oh my god you like the doctor”
“Hai”
“What”
“Calm down Ranma, oh god I knew you were going to act like this If I tell you, I shouldn’t had tell you”
“Come on ´Kane don’t say that you just take me by surprised”
“Ok so let’s return home”
“What are you talking about you are still hurt and if this guy is so great for you to like him then I want to meet him”
“But Ranma this is a secret you wont tell anyone right?”
“I swear on my honor never to reveal this secret”
“Good”
“Then let’s go”
“Hi is anyone here”
“Ranma don’t shout like that”
“Sorry ´Kane”
“Hi how may I help you?”
“Konichiwa doctor”
“Akane how nice to see you but May I ask what is wrong?”
“She hurt herself while we were sparring”
“Hi sorry for my manners, I’m doctor tofu nice to meet you”
“I’m Ranma Saotome sir” (Well at least he seem nice)
“Come in I think you should be tired of carrying Akane”
“Thanks sir but it seems is what we do”
“Yes Ranma is right” Said Akane with a big smile
“Ok so put Akane here please” Said doctor tofu while he was pointing to a table
“So how do you two meet?”
“Ranma carry me home four years ago when I was at the park and I twist my ankle”
“Yeah, then when we got to her house Mr Tendo offer me to train me so I stay there for three months”
“Oh so you are a martial artist” Said the doctor while he was revising Akane´s leg
“Yes”
“Does it no butter your parents you stayed with the tendo family?”
“Actually doctor I have no parents so I live on the road”
“Oh sorry Ranma it must be difficult”
“Well sometimes it is but I got to learn a lot of things, by now I have done a lot of fun jobs”
“Yes Ranma had told me of a lot of great jobs in his letters”
“yeah its really cool, generally I just cut wood or do the house chores so they let me stay and learn a new technique but sometimes I got great jobs like guard the town of the wolfs or something like that, its really a great exercise”
“Ok so your leg seems good, I said you only twisted it a little, let me go for bandages and some tea”
“May I Help?”
“Of course Ranma thank you”
They live the room where Akane was and go to the kitchen
“Doctor?”
“Yes Ranma”
“Please do not hurt Akane she is my best friend”
“She only twisted her leg a little Ranma is nothing to worry about”
“Please Doctor just promise me not to hurt her”
“Ok if it makes you feel better I promise never to hurt her”
“Great thanks a lot Doc, but remember that’s was promise of a martial artist and If its ever broken, I will train until I’m able to beat the life out of you sir”
“I’m sure I will never broke it and for the part that you will train until defeat me I don’t think it takes you so long to do it”
“Sir?”
“I read your ki Ranma its quite impressive even for a person of my age”
“Thanks doc”
“Do you wish to learn about medicine it might help you to know more pressure points?”
“Is it serious?”
“Yes you can stay here for a while and I can teach you some basic medicine”
“It would be great thanks a lot”
“You are welcome”
“So what do you need me to do?”
“Sorry Ranma but I do not understand”
“Yes what do you want me to do for payment for teaching me?”
“Oh you don’t have to do anything”
“I wouldn’t be comfortable with that deal doctor; I wish to help you for payment”
“Well what if you promise me, never to let anyone harm Akane”
“I’ll do that for free sir”
“I know but now it resides in your honor and its forever”
“Ok I will do it”
Eight Chapter
Doctor Tofu and Ranma return with Akane with tea and the Bandages
“Sorry Akane we stay talking”
“Don’t worry doctor”
“Ok so here it’s your tea and here is yours Ranma”
“Thanks” Ranma and Akane said at the same time
“Ok so it’s done”
“Thanks a lot doctor it feels a lot better”
“I’m glad, so Ranma I think you want to take her home, I will wait for you and when you’re back we can start, but take your time we can always start tomorrow”
“Thanks a lot Doc”
“Goodbye doctor”
Ranma and Akane were walking towards the tendo house they were walking slow because Akane´s injury
“What was that all about Ranma”
“The doctor offer me to teach me pressure points”
“So you are going to stay there”
“Yes”
“Ok”
“Come on Akane cheer up”
“But I taught you were going to stay at my house”
“It was my plan to but look the bright side; I was only staying for a week and know I’m going to stay for three months”
“But I won’t be able to see you”
“Of course you will, I have to talk to Nabiki so she enrolls me in the school”
“You are going to school with me”
“Yes I just can’t stay out of school for three months”
“So I’m going to see you everyday?”
“Yes and you can go visit me at the clinic I already ask the doctor and he said it was ok”
“Great”
“Even if that’s not enough I’m going to visit you the weekends”
“So what do you think about him?”
“About the doctor”
“Yes”
“He is nice”
“Do you like him?”
“Well not the same way you do but yes I like him” (But if he somehow hurt you, he is going to know what pain is)
“Have you like someone like that?”
“Yes but I would never tell her”
“Why not”
“She likes someone else plus I wouldn’t like to lose her friendship”
“Yes I think the same way”
“So who is she?”
“Why do you want to know?”
“I want to know my best friend future girlfriend”
“I already told you she likes someone else”
“Yes but surely she doesn’t know about your feelings and what a great guy you are”
“You think”
“Sure I bet if she knows you the way I know you she will like you the way you like her”
“I think that’s a bet you will lose ´Kane but even so thanks a lot”
“You should just tell her your feelings”
“And why don’t you tell the doctor how do you feel?”
“Because he is never going to notice me like that, I’m just a little girl for him”
“So what are you going to do about it?”
“What do you mean with that?”
“You aren’t just giving up right?”
“Yes”
“The Akane I know doesn’t give up no matter what”
“So what do you think I should do?”
“I don’t know, isn’t a way for you to look older?”
Akane turned to the sidewalks and notice to women walking down the street both had long hair
“What if I let my hair grown?”
“What?”
“Yes I will let it grow”
“Well if that’s what you think its better I support you Im sure you will look beautiful with long hair” (Even If I think you’re perfect the way you are)
“Thanks Ranma” Said a blushing Akane,(He thinks I’m going to look beautiful)
“Oh hello”
“Hi Kasumi”
“You two are finally here, where did you go?”
“Akane hurt her leg so we went to the doctor”
“Oh my Akane are you ok?”
“Yes don’t worry Kasumi it was nothing but Ranma insist in to checking it”
“Thanks a lot Ranma”
“You shouldn’t be thanking me, it was my fault Akane was hurt”
“What happen?”
“I kick Ranma so I hurt my leg”
“And how’s that Ranma´s fault”
“It isn’t but I convince him it was, sorry Ranma”
“It’s ok”
“Thats my little brother”
“Kasumi?”
“Sorry Ranma but it’s the way I think about you if its bother you I wont call you that again”
“No it doesn’t bother me but that means I can call you big sister?”
“Of course you can, we are family”
“Saw Ranma you do have a family”
“Thanks a lot”
“Ranma you should go to ask Nabiki to help you enter the school”
“That’s right I come back in a second” Ranma left to find Nabiki
“Thanks a lot Kasumi”
“Well when you told me he feels lonely because he didn’t have a family I taught it will cheer him up to know he has one right here”
“Thanks”
“Nothing to say thank you about Akane I really see him like my little brother and I think Nabiki feels the same way”
“You think so?” Suddenly a big laugh was heard coming from the house
“I think that proves it, apart from us have you ever heard Nabiki laughing with anyone else?”
“No she almost never does it, even when she is with us its hard to see her happy”
“Its the way she decide to be after mother died but somehow Ranma brings up the way Nabiki used to be, she cares as much for him as he care for us, she treats him like a sister”
“You are right”
“How can Ranma do that?”
“Its the way Ranma treat people like there was nothing more important to him than his friends, plus I think the big coin collection Nabiki has thanks to him help the situation”
“I told Ranma the coins wouldn’t help with Nabiki money obsession but he didn’t listen”
“He generally listens to you but I’m sure, he thought he was making the right thing”
“How can you know”
“Its very clear for the way he acts” (May be I don’t know him as you do Akane, but you wont be able to complete understand him while you don’t see his feelings)
Ranma enters the house he walks to the family room and find Nabiki watching T.V
“Hi Nabiki”
“Hi Ranma”
“Where were you two love birds?”
“Akane hurt during our sparring session so I took her to the doctor”
“Is she fine?”
“Yes”
“So what do you need me for?”
“Why do you think I want something?”
“Well you called me Nabiki”
“Well I taught that was your name”
“Yes and that’s why I tried you to understand but you always call me Nabs except when you need a favor”
“Ok so I do need a favor”
“What”
“I need you to get me in Akane´s class at school”
“Weren’t you going to stay just for a week”
“Yes but Doctor Tofu offers me to train me so I’m staying there for three months”
“Ok so I’ll register you tomorrow”
“Great thanks, how much”
“What you hurt me, come on Ranma we are friends and you are my sister best friend, I couldn’t charge you”
“Great, oh and Nabiki if you wish you can spice the story a little”
“What”
“Well weren’t you gonna sell the story of my life”
“How did you know?”
“You told me nothing was free in this life”
“So it doesn’t bother you if I invent a little thing or maybe two”
“No you’re are free to do it, just please don’t tell I kill someone or something like that”
“Ha ha ha ha, I would never do something like that”
“So what’s the story”
“You were raised by horses”
“Just curious am I able to talk with horses?, you know to watch what I told people”
“Yes why not there aren’t many horses in the school, plus your name fits with the story perfectly”
Nineth Chapter
“Hi ´Kane”
“Good morning Ranma”
The day before Ranma had returned with Doctor Tofu, and they start Ranma curse of basic medicine, doctor Tofu was surprised by the capacity of Ranma to learn, In one night he even learn how to cure ki burns, The next morning Ranma went to the school in the way an old lady splash him with water while he was passing, the lady apologize and she even gave him some cookies. Ranma thank her and then resume his way towards the school.
“Follow me, Nabiki told me you’re in my same group”
“I think we should thank her for that”
“Yes, I still don’t know how she does it”
“I think we are better with out knowing”
“Yeah may be you’re right”
“Oh let me present you my friends”
“Yuka and Sayuri, he is Ranma”
“Oh Akane had told us a lot about you”
“Yeah we wanted to know her boyfriend for a long time”
Everyone in the classroom got quiet
“She is not my girlfriend”
“He is not my boyfriend”
“Yeah come on why someone would want to be Akane´s boyfriend she is almost a boy” Said a boy from the crowd
“Yeah she is cool and all but she is a tomboy” Said other
“Yeah if someone dates her it would be like being with other boy”
Ranma turned to look Akane and saw unshed tears in her eyes, then he saw red , he was going to beat the crap out of everyone when he remember Minoru´s words.
Ranma some battles can’t be win with violence they must be overcome with words
“Well we didn’t wanna people to know but yes she is my girlfriend and Im lucky she pick me of all the people that ask her to be their girlfriend”
“You’re lying” said a boy from the crowd
“Why should I lie, actually it was dumb of me not to say it before, and I must warn everyone that I’m a martial artist and If I saw anyone calling her a tomboy again you are going to pay, may be she doesn’t bother be called tomboy but I wont accept it”
“Are you going to hit us?” Ask a boy with obvious fear in his voice.
“I wont this time but If anyone messes with my girlfriend again, Im going to show him what I can do”
“Ranma can I talk to you?”
“Oh yeah”
They got out of the classroom
“You didn’t have to do that you know”
“I’m sorry if it bothers you”
“No it’s not that”
“So what is it?”
“Now all people is going to think I’m your girlfriend”
“You don’t want theme to think I’m your boyfriend” Said Ranma with a tone of sorrow in his voice
“No it’s just that they are going to think you have a tomboy for a girlfriend”
“I don’t mind what they think but I just want them to shut up, plus maybe you’re a bit of a tomboy but that’s one of the reasons I like you”
“Thanks Ranma”
“Ok lets go”
“Hai”
“Let’s give them something to talk about” Said Ranma to Akane while he took her hand
Ok so I already apologize right, I’m in exams so its hard to write, actually right now I should be studying French instead of writing this, but I already know I’m going to fail the exam so well. Plus I have been a little depressed I just beg my mother to change me to another school but she said no, I know its coward to run of your problems but well I think that’s make me a coward, the only thing that keeps me going are my friends out of the school and the naruto songs they are really great I really love wind.
Ok so the reviews, Thanks a lot I love every single person that reviewed this story you are all know my best friend.
Special thanks to die-eine-andere for being my first reviewer.
Hououza: I’m glad you like the story so far best wishes for you to.
Runnerz: thank you although could you be more specific what is confusing
Ash-3: Thanks for notice it, I have start another sentence and I forgot to make it rigth
Paradisefairy: I’m glad you like even if it wasn’t what you expected, do you have a better summary for me to use, I would really appreciate if you had a better idea.
NL Kaos: Hi sorry but I can’t answer your questions right now but all will be answer in the next chapter.
Phantom Crossing: I’m sorry but I’m still doing this by my own, next time I will try to get someone. I promised.
Brother Angelon: The same I already told Phantom Crossing and well what you think about Genma, I still cant give my reasons why he left him but may be soon.
Lilykt7: Thanks a lot but I’m sorry Genma will show up eventually.
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Darth Thanatos: Ok about Ukyo well I cant tell yet what I’m planning it would ruin the surprise, I think Soun is intelligent but he is also unaware of his surroundings, well at least it looks that way to me, so he doesn’t know which art Ranma practice.
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